Waiting for Gouda

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Great, now MY stomach hurts.

November 6th, 2008 · No Comments

What does it take to become a writer in the advertising business?

Some recent evidence suggests that little more is required than a reptile brain.  I just saw a McDonald’s television ad depicting two semi-slobby looking dudes sitting in a booth (at Mickey D’s, natch) early one morning, stuffing their maws with giant eggy greaseballs soaked in maple syrup, or something.  I shall now transcribe, in it’s entirety, the dialogue:

Dude: Man I was hungry when I woke up.  I had some major hunger pains.

Other Dude: Pangs.

Dude: Pains.

Other Dude: Pangs.

Dude: Pains.

Other Dude: Pangs.

Dude: Whatever.

Commercial Writer: And… scene.  Now give me my money.

Me: What the hell was that crap?

Commercial Writer: That was my attempt to entice you into enjoying delicious and nutritious McDonald’s breakfast items.

Me: You suck.

Tags: I Hate Ads

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